These are the feedbacks from audience I have noted down on the drafts. The first comment is positive, Taslime said the masthead is bold and attractive so its something she would pick up. Therefore, I wouldn't need to change anything about the masthead.
Another comment by Taslima was that I should add more stories and pictures related One Direction. I will keep this in mind when improving these drafts.
A comment by Faith was that I should have more interviews with celebrities and models. I will keep this in mind when improving these drafts.
There were no negative comments about the contents page therefore, I won't need need to change the colours or the layout.
One of the students said I should have Justin Bieber on my magazine so I decided to put a picture of him on the contents page because there is enough space for images.
This is the draft of the double page spread and one of the students Faith said that I should change the layout because its too simple. I will keep this in mind when improving the drafts.
And Taslima said I should add colour to it like the cover and the contents page to make it more attractive and so that it looks like its from the from the same magazine.
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